The time is finally here, week one of ismithwords’ new weekly flash fiction challenge, Literary Lion. This morning I plucked a neon orange paper strip from under the watchful king and unfurled its corners to reveal the word ‘Space.’
So go ahead and commence with penning your pieces of 400 words and under, using the word ‘space’ as a prompt. It can be interpreted as literally or metaphorically as you wish. Remember to pingback to this page and to include the tag ‘literary lion’ so we can find you in the WordPress reader.
Good luck, and here is my space inspired tale…
Poison.
It was a bullshit phrase. As he uttered it his face glazed. For weeks I had ignored how closely the words were from tumbling off the tip of his tongue.
I was seventeen years old and it was a Friday night. I had just doused myself in Christian Dior’s Poison and smudged charcoal kohl across my eyelids. That scent was now destined to be etched into my brain alongside that phrase. A phrase of three little words that no one ever wants to hear.
“I.
Need.
Space.”
Bullshit. If I walked paces from where I was stood I was giving him what he asked for. But I couldn’t have stayed tethered at ten footsteps. He wanted an easy way of saying “I don’t love you anymore.”
It must have been the love leaving that glazed across his face. A demonic exorcism of something that was damaging. I’m sure if I had bothered to look in the mirror, I’d have seen it seeping from my pores too.
That’s a powerful piece Laura. It feels angry and sardonic. I think we’ve all been there, you capture that feeing very well and a great take on Space.
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Thank you! I wrote a few and this seemed as though it had the most to say, especially as it does seem we have all been there! Adios to that, I’ve got it out of my system!
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Good one!! That’s the best way.
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Teenage angst when once we thought we loved and lost. Great use of space.
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Thank you! It’s nice to hear I captured the teenage angst, so I can still remember that age even though it was quite some time ago… :-O
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A great read
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Love it! Creative way to use Space.
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Thank you! I did write a couple of sci-fi inspired stories, but this felt like a more original interpretation!
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I’m not sure which is worse to hear – “I need space” or “It’s not you, it’s me” 🙂
The breakup of a teenage romance is never an easy thing. Great story.
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Thank you! Haha, they’re definitely both up there with the tired one liners you think people only say in films because you can’t imagine someone actually uttering such pathetic words in real life… :-S
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Thank you for the prompt. Really liked your last line.
Here is my effort > https://thisismyironlung.wordpress.com/2015/06/04/my-own-space/
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Going to read through the others now.
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Thanks. I think without the last line it would perhaps be just another whine-y teenage love story…
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I really like this. Short but sweet and powerful.
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Thank you very much! I am trying to be less ‘wordy’, so this challenge is a good one for me to practise.
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Great prompt idea. Thanks for sharing and inspiring. 😀
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You’re very welcome, thank you for responding with such a good story!
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Thank you. It was a much needed release I hadn’t known how to form beforehand. It just kind of spilled out. Sometimes, we just need an outside catalyst. 🙂
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Space is a very big, cold and empty space, this post makes us feel what you felt.
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I’m glad I was able to do that, thank you!
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Here is my take on space, or perhaps not my take precisely, hope you like it
http://andytownend.com/2015/06/07/space-animals/
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I like the connection of poison to the demonic exorcism at the end of your story. Dark. Nice. Here’s mine: https://livingonchi.wordpress.com/2015/06/07/literary-lion-space/
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I’m so pleased you for noticed that! I’ve had a wander over to your lovely post and left a comment, thank you 🙂
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hi 🙂 my first try, thanks for the prompt.
https://ladyleemanila.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/leave-me-alone-literary-lion-space-and-whirligig-11/
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You’re very welcome, thank you for tackling it! I’ve left a comment on your post 🙂
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