Last week’s forest inspired prompt set the setting for many clandestine tales in the woods, but this week the theme is ‘morning‘.
You have seven days to craft a post of 400 words of less, inspired by ‘morning’. Remember to include the tag ‘Literary Lion’ in your piece and to pingback to this post so we can find your work in the WordPress reader. Here is my morning tale…
Wake up.
I became aware of the frown on my face as soon as I gained consciousness. A radiant ray glistened from the window across my left eye. It narrowed the pupil and created warmth in a strip along my skin. The sunlight was headache inducing.
Dusty particles pirouetted across the beam, vanishing as soon as they crossed to the other side. I took a deep breath and a pungent stench attacked my insides. I opened my mouth to avoid it, but the smell enveloped my lungs after clinging to the back of my throat.
I tried to stand. My legs weren’t listening, they stayed heavy on the floor. As I shifted my head away from the sunlight the rest of the room became clear.
I was just one of many.
Rows and rows of them and the only one moving was me.
Yikes!
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I like your story of becoming it made me feel how I did moments ago in a slow journey to wakefulness chased by light and in a slow heavy state. I particularly found the last line interesting ” I was just one of them.”
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Thank you! It is funny how sunlight chases you into waking up, I find it much easier to wake up in the summer than in winter!
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Me as well.
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I love how descriptive your story is. It really left me wanting more. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you! I tried to leave it quite open at the end, so it’s nice to know you wanted to hear more!
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Definitely a sensory oriented piece!
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Wow, this is incredibly powerful, disturbing and haunting and I love the way you created the visual.
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Thank you, that’s much appreciated! One day I will write a happy tale…
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Looking forward to it…hope you have reason to do so 🙂
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Sorry, I wasn’t able to join you the previous weeks. 🙂 I was on a break. This week, I am in.
A lovely piece of writing. The last sentence gives it a whole new angle and leaves you wondering.
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No worries at all, it’s great to have you involved whenever you can! Thank you, I had hoped it would cause a few imaginations to start wondering.
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Interesting choice of “them” at the end, rather than “us”.
I failed last week. I wrote “woods” at the very top of a new sheet of A4 and all I though about was teddy bears.
I’m in this week. And have also gone for your theme of shafts of light in the mornings. 🙂
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Thanks, I was going for the mysterious tone I guess. Teddy Bears aren’t all that bad, but it’s as if your head is filled with fluffy clouds and rainbows and unicorns.
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If I could get the teddybears/clouds/rainbows/unicorns combo out of my skull, I may be able to write something serious.
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It’s a common problem.
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Nice and creepy Laura. I like the contrast from a glistening radiant ray of sunlight to a hideous stench.
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Thank you! I’m glad you noticed, usually sunlight brings with it thoughts of freshness and the open air, but I saw this space quite differently.
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Great story – reminds me of being a student and waking up disorientated, somewhere strange, with a blistering hangover 🙂 Very well described.
I finally did my story! Better last minute than never.
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Much better late than never! Haha, I’m such a lightweight I never could quite drink enough to induce a hangover even as a student, I’m nor sure if that was a good thing or a bad thing…
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