Greetings from a Literary Lion on holiday! Whilst packing for my little Spanish vacaciones I remembered to tuck one of our lion’s words into my suitcase. I found an appropriate setting for its capture today, whilst I was trudging the Andalusian hike of the Rio Chiller, which saw me wading through water and tumbling onto what are now a pair of very bruised knees until I reached our word of the week… ‘Fall‘.
As always, you have two weeks to tell your tales in 400 words or less. Remember to tag ‘Literary Lion’ in your post, pingback to this post and all you Instagrammers and twitterers, don’t forget to give me a mention.
Here is my falling tale…
Tumble.
Every week he would arm me with the same headphones and a new track of calming. The voice would resonate within my ear, encasing all air beneath the padded earpiece as it commanded, twisting feathery wisps along my ear canal, shuddering the eardrum, dispatching its schemes right into my inner ear.
His legs would tuck neatly below the mahogany desk, smile soothing, nodding. My eyelids would weigh and droop as they were pulled under.
He would sit, I would fall.
This is what his Ph.D had taught.
Lovely work, here’s my effort, after a few weeks of absence 🙂 https://bencnicholson.wordpress.com/2015/09/17/the-fall-a-response-to-laura-feaseys-literary-lion/
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Thank you, I’ve just read it, great piece! I’ve been a little absent myself, life gets in the way sometimes doesn’t it?!
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This is my take on the prompt..! First time writing something like this..! Hope you like it.. By the way, loved you story too!
https://thecoolbookworm.wordpress.com/2015/09/17/fall-literary-lion/
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Thank you, I’ve just enjoyed reading it! I hope you continue to take part!
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Of course..! Looking forward to the next one 🙂 😀
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Kind of a comical point of view on it. 😉
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Thanks! You know what they say, if you don’t laugh…
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An interesting take on the prompt and I think the main character is poking fun at the psychologist and his PHd.
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Thank you! Yes, she’s definitely not his greatest fan.
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I’m fascinated by this, Laura. My first thought was some kind of guided meditation… will we perhaps hear more from this PhD in the future?
Here is my offering for the week: https://tuckedintoacorner.wordpress.com/2015/09/18/fall/
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Thank you! Your first thought was definitely along the right lines… 🙂 Loved your piece, it was beautifully written.
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Ole hola y adios. Have a wonderful time.
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Thank you! I did just that 🙂
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Awesome as usual. I am submitting my prompt after a while
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Thanks! That’s great, I look forward to reading 🙂
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Hi – thanks for liking my earlier blog post on “Flash Fiction Friday”… to reciprocate I have penned a small response to “Fall”… http://viewsfromtheridge.com/2015/09/25/fall/ come along and have a read if you have a few moments… it’s quite short 🙂 Like me…
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You’re very welcome, I liked the tone of your piece I read earlier, it was good storytelling! I’m really pleased to see you’ve come over here and taken part in my challenge, I shall have a read now. P.S I’m a 5″2 champion of all things short 😉
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Really liking the line “dispatching its schemes”. Aware, but still going through with the ‘treatment’.
Re. the next paragraph, are his legs smiling?
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Thanks, I quite like the idea of a voice delivering little messages like a postmaster to the brain. Hmm, what might a smiling leg look like?
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I have no idea, but that’s what I read. Maybe I need my eyes checked.
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I started off thinking it was meditation or something, but now I’ve decided it’s some form of creepy mind control 🙂
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There’s definitely something controlling about it. There is usually a sinister undercurrent with everything I write… 😉
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Looking forward to the next prompt. Hope life is treating you well.
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Thank you! It’s a little late this time as I’m mid moving house and it’s rather more chaotic than I expected. I will be posting a new LL tomorrow though 🙂
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Sitting tall
Soothing music
Humble fall 🙂
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Nice. Simple but with a lot to say!
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Really looking forward to the next prompt x
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That;’s lovely to hear! Sorry it’s running a little late, I’m in the middle of a house move and it’s taken longer than expected! It’s on its way tomorrow though 🙂
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That’s fine! I’m looking forward to it
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Come on. Get on with the next LL prompt. FFS!! 🙊🙉🙈😉
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I’m banning you. 👿
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😮 Sorry.
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Much belatedly, I’m throwing my piece in to the hat here: http://wp.me/p3LEiB-bo
Gotta love it when life gets in the way of passion.
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Ooh yes, I know all about that, life will often be a demanding little soul… 😉
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